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This is the end +V-Day Treat by ~HikariLightFox:iconHikariLightFox:



...Engulfs,
Burns, scorch, pain
cool, oblique, desolate
tears, shimmer,glimmer
sparkle,shine,warmth,
tears, smile, laugh,
fire, tail?, tails?
ears?,whiskers?,there?
here?, beat, thump
life, difference, run...
...Run, run faster!
Hurry, hurry, HURRY!!
Whack!...Look, see,
Boy? fuzzy, looking
light, beat again?...
What is this? Is there a word for it?
There is warmth again. What it it. It's inside again.
How? What? Befuddled? Pull. Oh right, (he's) still there...
breach, blush, hand?
take, look, see
shimmer,gold, dress
tails, whiskers, ears
him, tails, whiskers, ears
hand, chin...
My chin? Why's he holding my chin? What's with that look in his eye?...
Pull to away, can't, (he) pulls back
can't go, must, help
pulls, soft, warmth
blush, close eyes, hold
beats, together, light
break, stare, hands
together, he, who?
I, wha-?, eye close,
pulls, warmth, flutter,
light, soft, closer...
.............................
.............................
.....Love?
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Author's Comments

Okie dokie! This was actually kind of fun to right. It's a story about a girl and it's the second part of the last one. I thought you deserved an ending. This reminds me of THE GIVER a book we had to read last year. That's because the story line is all up to you (well almost). I mean you can make her a princess of a wolf and he could be 10 years older or he could be 5 years younger than a ten year old. She could be running from a sorcerer or whatever it's up to you. You just get to have her emotions and the events. BTW the dots are when she starts speaking in actual terms of language or when she just can't think more than one thing. Be careful a lot of the words and phrases are mixed up in actual shocked thought. (You know the way we can't put sentences together right when we're shocked.) Ex: breath, can't = Can't breath. Stuff like that. Other times it like still animation (you know where you take one picture you move the object a little and then you take another). Ex: hit, trip, fall. Just be prepared 'cuz this is really funky. :D

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Oh yeah people, tell me what kind of story you set up for them. PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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